PART 1

Alyssa Schukar
dealing with problems
distance, same lens and feel, no strong sigles, dark
kids in stairway, baseball celebration
The pictures had a different emotion
The story told is changed. started with eating disorder..


Travis haughton
family
Heads not faing camera dominating frame. pictures of signs. not good quality
Nice moments. nice action
He focuses on little kids
He had diversity.

Nick Adams
Stories
Focus. too many kids. not showing a story.
The strenth to take the 1st picture.
Bad Framing. good graphically
Most of the pictures look like they're cut off

carlos delgado
story
Cluttered background. fuzzy background. bad color. captions dont match pictures
Good cloud picture.
the judges are really negative
Some of the stories the pictures tell are incomplete


Winning portfolio
good angles, everyone is doing something, good moments
good color
too much photoshop, some look setup

contest recap video
Something that stands out, that doesnt have the same feel as the others.
rewarding diversity
good editor
no bad pictures

PART 2

The 1st picture story. He did a really good job in telling a story in 8 pictures. he covers different aspects and it comes together really good.

The judges think that the 2nd picture story is good and i think it isnt. They think he describes the sport in a good way and makes it excating. The only picture that seemed exciting was the one of the fan being excited.